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Archive for November 2008

Cleanse your colon: when and how to use it properly

28th
Nov
by Sarah Turner

Using the colon correctly will amaze your friends and impress your colleagues. Hey, it may even get you a promotion.

The colon has two main uses:

1. It lets you know that what follows is an explanation or an elaboration of what came before

You need to know one thing about English cricket: we can’t bat to save our lives.

I’ll tell you what I’m going to do to get fit: go to the gym every day.

2. It introduces a list

Searching down the back of the sofa I found a load of treasures: two sweets, 55p, a biro lid, and the remote control.

You need to bring three things to the meeting: a note pad, a pen, and a sense of humour.

Remember that the words before the colon must form a complete sentence. Put a full stop instead of a colon to check the sentence can stand alone.

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How to write killer sales letter copy and get more business

22nd
Nov
by Sarah Turner

The good old fashioned sales letter is often the first contact a prospective customer has with your company. Get it right and it could be the beginning of a beautiful friendship. Get it wrong and your letter will be filed under B for bin.

1. Woo-hoo I’m here!
You must grab the attention of the letter opener within about 4-8 seconds, so you’ll need a catchy headline or snazzy opening sentence.   

Get straight to the point and don’t waffle: ‘I am writing this letter to you because I would like to take the opportunity to introduce our company blah blah blah’ will have your letter heading for the trash quicker than you can say ‘boring’. 

2. What’s in it for me, me, me?
Tell your prospective customer about the benefits of your product or service – not the features. And try and stick to one quality benefit so the message remains clear.

So don’t say, ‘the new Quicko vacuum cleaner has a turbo capacity that is twice that of the most cleaners’. Instead say, ‘Quicko cleaners: clean your floors in half the time’. 

3. We’re good. No, really we are.
Once you’ve outlined the benefits, let your customer see they are in good company by telling them who else bought your product: ‘50% of all homeowners now own a Quicko cleaner’. 

5. What next?
Let the reader know what you want them to do next. So at the end of your letter have: Call a number; fill in a form; visit the website; order before next Wednesday and receive a FREE brush. <

6. P.S
After the sign-off include a PS. Research has shown that readers often read the headlines and the P.S before they decide whether they want to read the whole letter. So have something like: Visit our website at www.quickocleaners.co.uk before Wednesday 29th to receive your FREE brush.

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Dangly bits…

21st
Nov
by Sarah Turner

I love the expression dangling modifier. But what is it? And is it catching?  

A dangling modifier refers to a phrase which doesn’t have a grammatical connection to the rest of the sentence. This can have hilarious consequences. Ok, it can be vaguely amusing: 

Having been kicked in the air, the baby caught the ball.

What was kicked? The ball or the baby? To avoid the dangling modifier the sentence needs to be changed to: 

When the ball was kicked in the air, the baby caught it.

Got it? Good.

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To be or not to be? That is the question mark (and when to use it)

18th
Nov
by Sarah Turner

Not sure when to use a question mark? Confused as to where it should go? Probably not as it’s one of the easiest bits of punctuation to get right. But here’s a quick recap.

Do use a question mark

At the end of a sentence with a direct question: ‘is kick-off at 7.45pm tonight?’

In brackets when you’re not sure of a fact: ‘he was born in 1588 (?) in London.’

Don’t use a question mark

At the end of an indirect question: ‘the teacher asked the class what they were doing.’

When it’s a polite request: ‘would everyone without the right form please move to the front.’

With other punctuation: ‘he said what?!’

More than once: ‘want to get fit for the summer?????’

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