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I’ll have a P please Bob. Why you need the 4P’s to write persuasive copy

26th
Aug
by Sarah Turner

When it comes to planning copy, copywriters, me included, love a good acronym. Anything that helps us keep the message focussed and tight. Back in the day I was taught to use AIDA: Attention, Interest, Desire and Action.

Grab your customers’ attention with a good, pithy headline which pulls them into the piece. Create interest by demonstrating your product; telling your readers you understand their problems; and getting them involved.

Create desire, want, and need by showing how your product will solve their problems. And show how other people have found your product or service useful, life-changing, indispensable.

Then get them to take action. Summarise the problem you’re solving and then tell them what to do next. Buy this product now and get a free widget. Call now for a quote. Click here for your download.

So that’s AIDA. But now I prefer to use the 4P’s. Promise. Picture. Proof. Push. It’s more descriptive, goes a little deeper than AIDA and is easier to remember.

 

Promise
Rather than getting attention purely for the sake of it, perhaps with a shocking or unbelievable headline, promise tells your reader exactly what they’re going to get. It shows what’s in it for them. It sets your stall out. It says ‘read on ‘cos you’re gonna love what’s coming up.’

 

Picture
Picture puts your readers right in the thick of it by creating a believable scene in their heads. It explains the benefits. And it shows you understand the pain or problem they’re experiencing. You want your reader to think ‘oh my, that’s exactly what I’m feeling’.

For example:

Imagine dropping a dress size in time for your holiday
Finding a new job can be stressful, right?
How does a 50% increase in your monthly income sound?
Ever wondered how to feed a family of four for under a tenner?

 

Proof
Show them how it’s done with proof. Explain the features. And how it works. Testimonials, charts, video demonstrations, case studies and success stories all show how the promise you made at the beginning has come to fruition. Your customers are looking for proof. Saying ‘we think we’re really good at what we do’ just won’t cut it.

 

Push
Push is the big drum roll. It’s where you summarise the benefits and ask for a purchase or some other action. Don’t be afraid of the big push. This is what sales copy is about after all. By the time you’ve promised, pictured and ‘proofed’ – pushing your reader into action should be a doddle.

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Where do keywords go for a perfectly optimised web page?

19th
Aug
by Sarah Turner

As an SEO copywriter I’m always rattling on to my clients about keywords and where they should appear on a web page for maximum SEO. As I’m going on about Page Titles, H1 Tags, Meta Description Tags and Alt Tags I see their eyes start to glaze over.

So hooray for the chaps over at Seomoz who have put together the nifty visual below. It clearly shows where keywords need to appear. And mentions two of my favourite things: Chocolate. And donuts.

 

 Perfectly optimsied web page by Seomoz

© Copyright Seomoz 

 

Read the full blog post from Seomoz: How Do I Build the Perfectly Optimized Page?

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How to choose an SEO company or SEO consultant. (Read this before parting with a penny.)

17th
Aug
by Sarah Turner

Let me come right out and say it: there are a lot of SEO companies out there that are full of bull.

I had such a company email me out of the blue last week. They advised me that they had studied my website (yeah, right) and were concerned that I was not ‘appearing on the major search engines’. Not only that, but apparently, I had ‘very few inbound links’. Utter baloney.

A different company contacted a client of mine to tell him that Google had only cached 9 pages of his website which would adversely affect his search engine position. His website only has 9 pages! And he’s on page 1 of Google for every keyphrase we optimised his web pages for!

It seems that even Google can’t avoid these scammers.

“Dear google.com,
I visited your website and noticed that you are not listed in most of the major search engines and directories…”

Hilarious!

So if you get approached by an SEO company, or you’re in the process of interviewing an SEO company or consultant, this is what you need to know.

1. What other companies have they worked with? How are those websites performing? What keywords are they getting found for? What position do those sites achieve on Google? Ask for a contact at the company they’ve worked for and call them for a testimonial.

2. What search engines are their clients’ sites getting found on? Sure, Bing (formerly MSN) has recently purchased Yahoo Search in a bid to increase its market share. But let’s be honest, Google is the one you want to get found on. Being top of AltaVista, Excite or Lycos is all very well but collectively they have about 0.1% of the global market. Probably not enough to influence your bottom line much.

3. Ask to see a copy of the keyword research they’ve done for you and ask them why they’ve recommended the keywords they have. Remember, you want keywords or keyphrases which are searched for but are not so competitive that there are 1.5 million other sites with that phrase in their page title. Nor do you want to be found at the top of Google for a really offbeat phrase that absolutely no-one is searching for. It’s somewhere in the middle.

4. How are they going to include the keywords or phrases in your copy? Are they going to employ a copywriter to weave the keywords magically into the copy? Or is someone in the office just going to plonk the keywords any old how into the text? (Tip: you want the first one.)

5. Insist your SEO company sign an agreement not to do any work for your competitors. Why should you pay for keyword research and have your competitors benefit?

6. Make sure they give detailed monthly reports and stats. And ones that are easy to understand. You want to see a steady month on month improvement in your search engine rankings. And you want to know what keywords or keyphrases people are using to find your site.

7. Ask them if they actually monitor and analyse your stats? What are they going to do if the site isn’t performing well for the chosen keywords? What’s plan B?

8. Are they going to run a link campaign? Inbound links (links coming into your site) are as equally important for SEO as content. Google assesses a site by the content of the site and the number of quality inbound links there are. And if they are going to run a link campaign, what type of links do they hope to obtain?

 

SEO is not smoke and mirrors. Any SEO bods worth their salt are going to tell you exactly what they’re doing and what they hope to achieve. Remember, no-one can guarantee you top of page 1 of Google.  

A client told me last week that they’re paying £300 a month to an SEO company but they’re not sure what they’re getting for that. That’s £3600 a year and they’re not sure what they’re paying for? Before handing over a penny ask the questions above. If the SEO company or consultant starts muttering and getting all weird, run for the hills. Your money is better spent elsewhere.

Shameless plug: For keyword research, PPC, competitor analysis, link building campaigns and a bunch of other cool stuff, I can highly recommend Rob Dobson at SEM London. (Please note: he’s really good which means he’s always stupidly busy. I have to book him in two months in advance to work with my clients!)

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Are you for real? Hilarious conversation with a ‘Google expert’

10th
Aug
by Sarah Turner

So this company calls me up on Friday afternoon and says:

Dubious company: Hi, we’re working with Google and we just wanted to let you know about a phrase that has recently become available which was last seen 11 months ago. It’s ‘marketing agency Surrey’. It’s a great opportunity. (There are so many lies in this opening sentence it’s hard to know where to start.)

Me: (Already smelling the BS) for what?

Dubious company: To get you higher up on Google.

Me: Hmmmm…right. So higher up the organic listings?

Dubious company: No. This is about sponsored links on page 1 of Google.

Me: Oh PPC then.

Dubious company: No. Sponsored links.

Me: (Totally cheesed off ) if you’d looked at my site you would have seen I’m an SEO copywriter. It’s what I do for a living.

Dubious company: (Aggressively) SEO is dead. And you of all people should recognise that…

Me: ‘Click’.

 

Moral of the tale: If you receive a call from 020 7345 5163 don’t answer it.

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Why techies shouldn’t write web copy

24th
Jul
by Sarah Turner

Ok, so I know this isn’t aimed at me; but even so. What does it all mean? Answers on a postcard. Or leave a comment.

With considerable experience in the application of advanced integration technologies to drive business strategy, partnered with experience in pragmatic enterprise architecture consulting, [business] has the skills and experience to be able to get to the bottom of the business direction and challenges and then be able to match these with the available technology.

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